The Face of Blankness


This morning, the tide is hidden. Only its call is heard from out a smear of pastel white. In the face of this blankness, desire attempts to burn off the marine layer. Still, the smell of salt and sea linger and the curve of the earth (only the ocean can reveal) is never silent.

Photograph by me! Last summer on the coast.
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16 responses to “The Face of Blankness”

  1. vermavkv Avatar
    vermavkv

    What a beautifully evocative piece. Your words paint a scene that is both tranquil and deeply reflective, allowing the reader to experience the ocean through more than sight alone. I especially love the contrast between the hidden tide and its unmistakable presence through sound, scent, and feeling.

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    1. T. Ahzio Avatar
      T. Ahzio

      Thanks so much!

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      1. vermavkv Avatar
        vermavkv

        You are most welcome.
        Stay connected and keep sharing.

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  2. bilawalrind1212 Avatar
    bilawalrind1212

    Amazing

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    1. T. Ahzio Avatar
      T. Ahzio

      Kind of like Qawwali. Thanks my friend.

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      1. bilawalrind1212 Avatar
        bilawalrind1212

        You are most welcome My friend.

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    2. Lauren Avatar
      Lauren

      I agree!

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  3. Damien Riley Avatar
    Damien Riley

    This is very good. I found myself waiting for the thumbnail to load 🤭 then I read the title.

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    1. T. Ahzio Avatar
      T. Ahzio

      Thanks so much!

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  4. Marie-Gaye Barton Avatar
    Marie-Gaye Barton

    Wonderful photograph and the poem depicts it so well. ‘The curve of the earth is never silent’ is so powerful.

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    1. T. Ahzio Avatar
      T. Ahzio

      Thanks Marie-Gaye. Hope things are well.

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      1. Marie-Gaye Barton Avatar
        Marie-Gaye Barton

        Thanks yes, all good, been busy re-jigging an old ‘work’ of mine and now taking a rest from it. I want to be more actively involved here, all about time management! Hope all is well with you, too.

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      2. T. Ahzio Avatar
        T. Ahzio

        Sorry, I’m not on WP as much. That sounds great. It’s always good to give things a rest and come back to them with reset eyes and ears. I’ve been working on other things that has kept me busy, but I’ll back posting more in the fall. Talk with you soon.

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      3. Marie-Gaye Barton Avatar
        Marie-Gaye Barton

        I hadn’t been on WP very often either over the last months but am now making an effort to show up each day. The discipline does me good. It’s good to have other things on the go too. xxx

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  5. Tom Kael Avatar
    Tom Kael

    Class

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    1. T. Ahzio Avatar
      T. Ahzio

      Thanks!

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