The Distance of Fall

The path follows a simple circle
Through hemlock, cedar, & ash
Smooth
Like a freeway of dirt
Only the creek works hard
Passing under footbridges
An August trickle

Today, I hear the rain fall
Slicing the month
into two dry halves
Branches droop under
the weight of the new moisture
Fresh drops, warm
With summer inside them

Apples will begin to fall
Blackberries ripen
Hanging on to the moisture
of last spring’s slanted rain
From seed, plant, growth
Love
and again

Fall lies in the distance
Patient

24 responses to “The Distance of Fall”

  1. Jane Pryce Avatar
    Jane Pryce

    A very interesting photo. What is the background?

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      A leaf and the dirt of a trail. Hi!

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  2. Popi Avatar
    Popi

    Evocatively raw. Bravo!

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks so much Popi!

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  3. mcouat90 Avatar
    mcouat90

    Great job πŸ‘

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks!

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  4. Marie-Gaye Barton Avatar
    Marie-Gaye Barton

    Wonderful, as ever.

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks Marie-Gaye. Hi!

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  5. cybermuse74 Avatar
    cybermuse74

    this is AMAZING

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks so much. That’s quite the compliment. Take care.

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  6. hurdjp Avatar
    hurdjp

    Powerful metaphors. Thanks.

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks so much!

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  7. sfbulldogh Avatar
    sfbulldogh

    You are a master of words But are we in a Simulation ?

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks. Simulations are all over the place. Just pinch yourself and remember that it’s just another beautiful day. Take care, my friend!

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  8. Kim E Upton Avatar
    Kim E Upton

    It’s almost as if I can smell Autumn while reading…

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      I’m waiting for it. I’m not the biggest fan of hot and humid or even hot and dry. It’s probably because I was raised in a very temperate rain forest area. 50 and drizzle is in my blood. Lol.

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      1. KE Upton Avatar
        KE Upton

        Heat and humidity are not fun at all – currently going through it right now. Phew! Gimme a cool rainy October over the thick air of August.

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  9. Euphoricgoddess27! Avatar
    Euphoricgoddess27!

    I loved the imagery in this poem. Made me feel apart of it.

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks so much. I appreciate that!

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  10. Eterea Avatar
    Eterea

    🀍

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  11. theseasons Avatar
    theseasons

    A beautiful poem!

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks so much!

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  12. anthony Avatar
    anthony

    Reading this, I feel my soul moving slowly,
    pausing, breathing, and paying attention.
    Each word, each phrase, each image feels like a step forward.
    It’s not just about a change of seasons; it’s a quiet journey.
    And behind every moment, I sense a story waiting to be noticed.

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    1. T. Ahzio Avatar
      T. Ahzio

      That’s a beautiful response Anthony. Thanks so much.

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