The Sun

The sun paints this desert 

With harsh strokes of grass

Red dabs of earth & brittle clay

A naked abstract...bare

That favors no one and all

Where decay sits next to renewal

And the wind, once just a haunting

Is a ghost no more

For it scrapes and stirs

The crumpled landscape


Here...I am but an etching

Vulnerable and fragile

A paradox of movement

Comprised of a simple sanguine liquid

Within a thin atmosphere of skin

Asking only for a cold-water spring

To replenish my spirit

I cup my hands, for even the sun

Cannot quell its coolness

But it is...I am, merely transient


The ground beneath me baked

Into a dirt like powder

Ash, leaf, and seed

Who scamper and dance

In the cooked swirl

Settling between toes

Of the ancestors...

Those rocks who knew


The sun as adolescent

A child first learning

The ways of gravity


Here, I become nothing

Pulled into myself

A ball, a world, a satellite

Separated from my importance

Falling, through a continuum


Wishing to be unbound

Yet, there is one strong stream

Who is my tether

That still holds onto a trickle

Adorned with balsam, lupine, and fiddleneck

Yanking me back to the depth

Of human sight, to perception

Where the first Romantics wrote, and

To where my eyes meet yours
Permanence & Cycles

18 responses to “The Sun”

  1. Penn,… Avatar
    Penn,…

    So, so beautifully written, …. I’ve read it through three times., … and now I’m going back for the fourth, …💫

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks Penn!

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      1. Penn,… Avatar
        Penn,…

        No Thanks needed, it’s so mystical, … it keeps drawing me back, …💫

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  2. jessicaisachristian Avatar
    jessicaisachristian

    That is beautiful.

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks so much Jessica!

      Like

      1. jessicaisachristian Avatar
        jessicaisachristian

        Your welcome.

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  3. Fearless Info Avatar
    Fearless Info

    Very beautiful Writen

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks so much!

      Like

  4. lisaapaul Avatar
    lisaapaul

    This is so beautiful, the way you weave the descriptions of you and nature throughout in a magical way. The last 6 lines are sublime! I love this

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks Lisa.

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  5. helenaolwage Avatar
    helenaolwage

    I just love this! You are so talented. Beautifully written and expressed.

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks Helen! I appreciate that.

      Like

  6. Shreyadita Avatar
    Shreyadita

    Am deeply touched by this, beautifully written!

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks so much! I really appreciate it!

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  7. Shishir Avatar
    Shishir

    Now that’s how you write, very beautifully written.

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks so much!

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  8. nadinejwalters Avatar
    nadinejwalters

    A beautiful poem. I see and feel your words.Thank you!

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks so much!!!!!

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