Wild Lake of Summer

I’ve come to walk along her edges 

Where I have seen the rain fall hard

Upon her surface

Creating a mirage of current

And where the sun places twinkles

Inside the ripples of her smile.



Like many times before, I dip my hand

Into her body, she is still cold

Even this far into the season.

For the sun can only skim her.

There are deep hidden springs

Within her heart, that

Forever cast new spells.



The encircling trail

Is now all dust and powder

And I feel as if I have hooves

Kicking up clouds, settling

Quietly, quickly behind me.

A patch of dry rocks

Where the spring runoff

Had cascaded through crevices

Show the wrinkles of her ancient age

Bones of memory

And though she stays stoic

She aches, (as I do) for fall and winter.



At times it seems we are rebelling

Against the sky

Rebelling, even further out

Into all that’s unknown

Until we reach the point where our fingertips

Touch the inseparable network of everything.



There is a waterfall

Tucked up high in the surrounding mountains.

Calmed of its spring strength.

I could reach it through deciduous and evergreen.

Perhaps that’s where the tale is

The one I will take back with me.

The story that proves her magic

That quells the heat of the city.

For once I have the story

Nothing can sink its teeth into me.

I will be stripped bare down to the aura

I will have absorbed her power

And even if the city sees the pain in my eyes

I will persevere.



I’ve come to hear something in a voice

Only she can create.

That I am free.

I bend down and drink her

With my head next to her shore

All pain vanquished.
This is one of the Forlorn Lakes, near a place called Indian Heaven.

41 responses to “Wild Lake of Summer”

  1. With Love, Tassie 🤍 Avatar
    With Love, Tassie 🤍

    Beautifully written!

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks so much Tassie!!!

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  2. ehg Avatar
    ehg

    Oh, this is beautiful!

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks so much ehg!

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  3. Pooja G Avatar
    Pooja G

    Loved the poem, especially that last verse.

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks Pooja!

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      1. Pooja G Avatar
        Pooja G

        You’re very welcome!

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  4. camilla wells paynter Avatar
    camilla wells paynter

    Resplendent! “the inseparable network of everything” and “stripped bare down to the aura” and so much more in this. . . it’s magic!

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks Camilla!

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  5. aleahfitzwater Avatar
    aleahfitzwater

    Shew, what beautiful personification.

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks so much!

      Like

  6. Alan J. Blaustein Avatar
    Alan J. Blaustein

    Fine poem, beautifully expressive!

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  7. Lori Pohlman Avatar
    Lori Pohlman

    So lovely!

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks so much Lori!

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  8. She Writes Alone Avatar
    She Writes Alone

    Wow. So many feels in this piece. I love it! Thank you for sharing and thank you for the Like in my site. Made me smile. I hope this does the same for you. 🙏🏽💜

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Yes, it does. Your post is very similar to my situation with some differences, of course.

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      1. She Writes Alone Avatar
        She Writes Alone

        I don’t know whether to be happy or sad that someone is feeling and experiencing the same things. Sending light and healing. We can all use a little bit more of that! ❤

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      2. Ahzio Avatar
        Ahzio

        Thanks so much! I’ll take it.

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  9. grimspound Avatar
    grimspound

    Beautiful!

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks so much!!

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  10. Annie H Avatar
    Annie H

    Lovely imagery – especially this:

    And where the sun places twinkles

    Inside the ripples of her smile.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks so much Annie.

      Like

  11. Sejal Gohil Avatar
    Sejal Gohil

    That’s so beautiful

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thank you Sejal! Next week, I’ll be posting a similar poem. I’d be honored if you read it. Take care.

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      1. Sejal Gohil Avatar
        Sejal Gohil

        i most definitely will!

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  12. SAB Avatar
    SAB

    Loved the poem

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks so much!

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  13. nandasagec Avatar
    nandasagec

    Nice

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks so much!

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  14. camilla wells paynter Avatar
    camilla wells paynter

    “For once I have the story
    Nothing can sink its teeth into me.”

    Yes. So beautiful! The lilting cadence of this poem instantly calls to mind the gentle lapping of waves on a lakeshore. Well done! Love it!

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks Camilla!

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  15. Shel R. Avatar
    Shel R.

    Beautiful words and photo. ❤

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thans Shel!

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      1. Shel R. Avatar
        Shel R.

        Absolutely! ❤

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  16. Gagan Singh Avatar
    Gagan Singh

    so well written…i am moved within

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks so much Gagan!

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  17. clarakatalin Avatar
    clarakatalin

    Lovely …

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks so much!

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  18. Laura Avatar
    Laura

    This is so beautiful, I love that lake image! Absolutely breathtaking

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks Laura! Yeah Indian Heaven has been on my bucket list for a while now. That’s very close to that lake you see. I had been there a few years back. I could look to the west and there would be Mt. Saint Helens and just turn my head to the right (east) and there would be Mount Adams, like right next to you! But every time I’ve chosen to go back, the snow was still blocking my way or mosquitos chased me away! Lol. Good to hear from you!

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      1. Laura Avatar
        Laura

        Awesome! I’d love to go there one day

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