Formations

I can hear her  

Carving out the valley below.


She has sung this way for centuries

In a voice I know...for

Her tone is part of my resonance.

The shape of her course


Is the shape of my course.

At times rapid, in haste

To meet expectations

Whether her own or someone else’s.

Other times, slow in patience


To form pools, back currents

Allowing a respite for reflection.

She is no fool.

She knows how the quiet mingles

With the rain & dissonant wind.


She is not made of perfect lines.

And on those occasions

When the weather has darkened

She will reshape the valley...and

As I stand among others

Next to lovers fallen

With our moss-covered branches intertwined

My roots dig into whatever mud has solidified

Into the new path she sculpts.

If there be no footing

I will need my roots no more.

All my essence, that resonance

Shall be given back to the valley she carves

In whatever form I will have taken

Believer, nonbeliever, goddess or grub

Fern, flower, or fleeting leaf


Silence and cacophony combined.
Up in the clouds. This is about 4000-5000 feet up above the Salmon River, near Mt. Hood. Click on image to enlarge.

16 responses to “Formations”

  1. Jane Pryce Avatar
    Jane Pryce

    Beautiful, so full of the feeling of the earth around you

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks Jane!

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  2. Any Element Avatar
    Any Element

    That feeling when the fog suddenly arrives

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Or when it starts to dissipate.

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      1. Any Element Avatar
        Any Element

        Really different feeling there

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  3. camilla wells paynter Avatar
    camilla wells paynter

    “If there be no footing, I will need my roots no more.” ❤

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks my friend.

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  4. P. J. Gudka Avatar
    P. J. Gudka

    Very well written. Really liked the word play in these lines “The shape of her course, Is the shape of my course.”

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks Pooja!

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      1. P. J. Gudka Avatar
        P. J. Gudka

        You’re very welcome!

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  5. lisaapaul Avatar
    lisaapaul

    This is so beautiful. To me, she is water, a river perhaps, and the rainwater that flows down to her. Beautiful descriptions. ❤️

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks so much Lisa. Yes, when I was following the trail in the image you see, I was next to the river most of the way. Somewhat loud. But when I reached the top of that canyon, the river was far below and I could just barely hear the water. Take care!

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  6. chameleon15026052 Avatar
    chameleon15026052

    This piece quietly echoes the truth that we are shaped not in isolation but in deep, often unseen resonance with forces far older than us—ancestral, environmental, emotional. “Her tone is part of my resonance” lands like a confession of inherited rhythm, where the speaker isn’t just witnessing change but is intrinsically woven into its unfolding. It’s a reflection on how identity is carved—not just by will, but by patience, expectation, and quiet persistence, much like water etching a valley over centuries. Beneath the simplicity lies a powerful reminder: our pace, our shape, our path—they’re not entirely our own, and that’s not always a loss.

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Beautiful close reading! Thanks so much! I’m honored.

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  7. grimspound Avatar
    grimspound

    Beautiful!

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks so much!

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