The Death of Art

Spillwords published a short story of mine. The Death of Art. I like Spillwords because it’s WordPress’s magazine, with an editor. So, it’s connected to WP while being its own entity. The story, if you haven’t read it already, is a mix between Stream of Consciousness (James Joyce, Proust, and others) and Edgar Allen Poe’s Single Effect Theory. It’s a horror story…maybe. I tend to like implementing multiple themes. It’s not an easy thing to do. The story is not long. It would qualify as Flash Fiction, which is perfect for the internet. Give it a like using your WP account as access to Spillwords and take advantage of Spillwords yourself! The link to the story and Spillwords is below. Thank you for the support! I’ll be reading your posts!  

22 responses to “The Death of Art”

  1. vermavkv Avatar
    vermavkv

    Very nice

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks my friend!

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  2. camilla wells paynter Avatar
    camilla wells paynter

    I’ll admit it’s not my genre, but your style is admirable. I especially appreciate the way you handled the POV of the disembodied. Stellar! I feel I’m still sniffing out the metaphors.

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      I realize it’s not for everybody. But it was fun to write! Take care Camilla.

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      1. camilla wells paynter Avatar
        camilla wells paynter

        You have a gift, for sure. Your descriptions are captivating. I always learn from people who can do that.

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      2. Ahzio Avatar
        Ahzio

        Thanks, I appreciate it. I think it’s funny how Spillwords took an image of mine an “A.I.’d it. Plus, they added an audio version, which sounded so damn happy or unemotional. Both. Kind of entertaining for me.

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      3. camilla wells paynter Avatar
        camilla wells paynter

        Right? I wouldn’t like not having a say in how something of mine was read.

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      4. Ahzio Avatar
        Ahzio

        Right. I didn’t know they were going to do that. Live and learn.

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  3. Not all who wander are lost Avatar
    Not all who wander are lost

    Very nice

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks Wanderer!

      Like

  4. andreawilliamson381 Avatar
    andreawilliamson381

    Wow. I loved how you described being a spirt-thought. It’s how I felt for a very long time.

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Yes, thanks. That’s the stream of consciousness. It’s broken patterns, not a dialogue, but a dialectic. We tend to think differently then we speak. Take care!

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  5. lisaapaul Avatar
    lisaapaul

    This is so original and haunting. It will stay with me. I was rooting for the ghost and was so sad at the ending, but that just made it more chilling.

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks Lisa!

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  6. NBevilaqua Avatar
    NBevilaqua

    Whoa–it’s so good, and so well-written, and SO disturbing! (You had me at “Proust,” by the way.)

    I have a bizarre fascination with murderers, serial killers, etc.–just because I’m trying to understand why they do what they do, and HOW they could get themselves to do it. And why do most of them seem to have elaborate patterns that are unique to them? What the hell are they thinking?

    But what you’ve done is a fascinating take on trying to see what’s going on in that kind of mind. Why the “art”?

    I swear I’ve seen those “outlines” myself, and they looked just as you describe. Except I wasn’t killing anyone at the time. 🙂

    Congratulations on the publication!

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks Nancy. I too wonder about serial killers and their motives. The “art” is a secondary (or more) theme to the piece. The serial killer is killing the artist, who then becomes the artist themself. Sort of a copycat of themself, but, then they are already dead? Or are they? Or we tend to think of violence/murder in terms of art, like “the art of war”. There’s more to it, but that’s a little bit of what I was aiming for. Take care!

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  7. R. M. Greta Avatar
    R. M. Greta

    Love this and how dark it is. The last paragraph felt like a symphony

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks so much. That’s a stellar compliment. I’m truly honored.

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  8. R. M. Greta Avatar
    R. M. Greta

    I just read this again very slowly and I have to say this may be one of my new favorite pieces. I love the artwork view of this and the materialization and the haunting. Well done!

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Again, I’m honored. Take care!

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  9. Marie-Gaye Barton Avatar
    Marie-Gaye Barton

    I look forward to reading this – very behind! I have just joined.

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Great!

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