Cold River (A Murder Ballad)

How cold this river runs  

How cruel this river runs

All light is caught in a freeze

Here, the water has no peace

All is numbed by an endless rain

I swear the moon has a crease

Her voice is just below the ravine

I try to silence the refrain

Her song echoes above the trees


I see her in the river’s current

I think I can catch her

Bring her back up

If only to the coldest of sunshine

My fingers slide upon her skin

But she slips through my grasp

So, I look downstream

To catch a glimpse of her


I drink from the hidden lake

Clear, cold, and clean

I dance upon winter’s snow

On the edge of everything

The leaves have fallen low

No telling what they’ve seen

Soon the river will meet the sea

Where all lies will finally cease
When the Willamette River meets the Columbia River, the latter breaks up and forms a delta of islands until it converges downstream. (A clue? Is this poem really a murder ballad?)
The Clackamas River near an interesting little town named Three Lynx.

19 responses to “Cold River (A Murder Ballad)”

  1. lisaapaul Avatar
    lisaapaul

    This is beautiful, haunting and eerie. I enjoyed it.

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      ’tis a bit haunting and eerie. Thanks.

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  2. Moongirl Avatar
    Moongirl

    Beautiful. And I love your photos.

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thank you moon sister!

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  3. anuvenugopal Avatar
    anuvenugopal

    Beautifully written.

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks so much!

      Like

  4. Marie-Gaye Barton Avatar
    Marie-Gaye Barton

    Fabulous as ever Ahzio. Poetic and beautiful. Three Lynx – what a wonderful name.

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks Marie-Gaye! Yeah, I think the name is neat. Interesting tiny town in the middle of the forest.

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      1. Marie-Gaye Barton Avatar
        Marie-Gaye Barton

        Sounds wonderful, must look it up.

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  5. Kibuchi Erick Avatar
    Kibuchi Erick

    Perfect shots😍and the vividness of the lines is great. Beautiful piece

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Much appreciated! Thanks!

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  6. Gary D. Smith Avatar
    Gary D. Smith

    Hauntingly beautiful! To me, all aspects of nature have a spirit.

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks so much Gary and I agree.

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  7. sfbulldogh Avatar
    sfbulldogh

    Y’all sure can write up a storm.

    Cad2ence r2eminds me of e.e. cummings

    h.

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Early on I was influence by Ferlinghetti, but have loved a lot of e.e. as well. Thanks so much.

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  8. VinayVaidya Avatar
    VinayVaidya

    telling what they’ve seen

    Soon the river will meet the sea

    Where all lies will finally cease

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Yes. Thank you.

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  9. babybean Avatar
    babybean

    Love it

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks so much!

      Like

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