Consider

April is still cruel 
And this city? Still unreal.
The snow will melt
Daffodils will bloom
Arrows will still fly
Even Cupid shoots them
With awkward aim

Are we mistaken to listen to the wind?
That whisperer that works
Its way between warm clothing
...Tickles, biting softly
On the ends of our touch
Imprinting its song on our necks.
                                                          “I would have never thought 
You would become my lover
Having passed you
In the hallway a thousand times
Among the smell of floor wax
Cafeteria food, and
The slamming of locker doors.
...Excuse me
I’m younger than that”
Now, in the city of Yonder 
Stands our orphan
With his gun
Walking along the edges
Of an eternity of assumptions
The quickest way to freeze
Us into madness...oh, do not
Ask what is it?
Even Dorothy killed two witches
And I swear
The sky has been etherized.

For I have known it, known it all
Have known evenings, mornings
Afternoons
Have known
The familiarity of strangers
My nose buried in their bosom
Of warm, warm skin, bared to
Gravity, orbit, & galaxies
Moving...moving...
Moving
                                                        “What a Sunday drive it was 
Unplanned, without directions.
The heat of summer blew
Into our rolled down windows”
O you who turn the wheel  
and look to windward,
Consider.

In this poem, I abstracted lines of famous poems and lyrics to shape my own poem out of them. Along with the poem I added on of my abstract images. Thanks!

13 responses to “Consider”

  1. camilla wells paynter Avatar
    camilla wells paynter

    The TS Eliot is the only reference I got here (blushing! 😉 ). But I love the concept, and how you’ve made this weave in and out of personal and collective impressions (and end with a warning!).

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      No need to blush. Just some word fun of mine. Thanks!

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  2. camilla wells paynter Avatar
    camilla wells paynter

    Beautiful image, too. It’s like cracked lake ice.

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  3. Bruce Avatar
    Bruce

    Wonderful, thought provoking. Great poem. Thanks!

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks Bruce!

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  4. Jane Pryce Avatar
    Jane Pryce

    Loved it. What a wonderful and thought-provoking idea.

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks so much Jane!

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  5. NBevilaqua Avatar
    NBevilaqua

    Wonderful! References to my favorite poet AND one of my favorite Dylan songs! I probably missed some others…

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Those are the two main ones. Thanks Nancy!

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  6. Gary D. Smith Avatar
    Gary D. Smith

    I love this poem, not only what it says but how. Beautiful!

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks Gary!

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  7. Karin Avatar
    Karin

    hey, I love this! I’ve done something similar using a particular poet’s most used words, which is also a fun exercise. Can you share some of the poets you drew on to do this? I’d love to know.

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      The two main ones are TS Eliot and Bob Dylan. Others include Lawrence Ferlinghetti, Adrienne Rich, William Stafford, and a few others.

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