Falls

They are fat during the spring melt, thin when summer wanes. 

In winter, snow slows their progress, placing a halo of ice around them.  

In autumn, they play with leaves and rain, and an occasional evergreen branch. 

There is always mist and a rainbow in its midst when the sun comes calling. 

Calm with their frenzy, stoic as they giggle, tender power. 

Dippers plunge themselves underneath their crest, unafraid of the current and the long tumble only a couple of feet away 

While sparrows and tanagers sing hidden duets and soliloquies to the sky. 

The ravens dart above, in ones or twos, preferring a casual conversation about reason and magic, which are indistinguishable. For here is where skeptics and believers meet.

Around them 

The forest can be still, quieter than comfortable, with the movement of shadows, the changing of light tucked deep inside. 

But you know this is natural and your fear is combined with a sense of calm. 

Other times, the forest yells, trees vibrate like vocal cords, rivers force their voice up into the blue and gray sky between the trees and though you’re quiet, your body hums along with their voices. 

Some sweet water springs last year ‘round. You drink, even when the water is high, soaking your shoes and socks while you reach for the wildest water you’ve ever tasted. Every sip is your first. 

There are still a few old growths standing, with roots, twisting around themselves miles long, like fingers running themselves over the stomach of a lover.  

The smell of pine is as thick as syrup…until 

You hear one. 

As you approach, that pine smell is pushed down into the ground, taken away with the spatter, eventually moving downstream with the creeks. 

In each season, you hear small nuances in how their water…falls 

The twist of one note, a change in the rhythm of their syncopation. They are full of distortion yet never abandon harmony. 

And I think of something silly. 

They are like us, you and me.  

For I remember when I held your hand… 

Here 

…Listening…to them 

While the heat of summer scorched the world, and the rain of storms washed us away. 

I speak these words… softly… so that you might hear.  

Lower South Falls in Silver Falls State Park. Complete with someone about to walk underneath it.

39 responses to “Falls”

  1. joseph elon lillie Avatar
    joseph elon lillie

    A beautiful piece. Especially that last line.

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks so much Joseph. Yes, that last line is important.

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  2. Pooja G Avatar
    Pooja G

    A touching post, very much enjoyed reading it.

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks so much Pooja! I really appreciate it!

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      1. Pooja G Avatar
        Pooja G

        My pleasure!

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  3. camilla wells paynter Avatar
    camilla wells paynter

    Lovely images! This is really great: “The ravens dart above, in ones or twos, preferring a casual conversation about reason and magic, which are indistinguishable. For here is where skeptics and believers meet.”

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks so much Camilla. I was thinking a lot about ravens and crows when I came to that line!

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      1. camilla wells paynter Avatar
        camilla wells paynter

        And the intersection of reason and magic is SO raven!

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      2. Ahzio Avatar
        Ahzio

        True!

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    2. Ana Daksina Avatar
      Ana Daksina

      My favorite part too, Camilla ~ though, like you, I had trouble choosing!

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  4. Freddie Avatar
    Freddie

    Beautiful writing Ahzio

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks so much Freddie!

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      1. Freddie Avatar
        Freddie

        You’re welcome Ahzio

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  5. Ernie 'Dawg' Avatar
    Ernie ‘Dawg’

    This is really touching Ahzio, the memory of a loved one brought on by nature, truly heartfelt.

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks so much Ernie!

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      1. Ernie 'Dawg' Avatar
        Ernie ‘Dawg’

        You’re welcome

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  6. LoveLifeHappiness&More💙💙 Avatar
    LoveLifeHappiness&More💙💙

    Well written and lovely image.

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks so much T!!

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      1. LoveLifeHappiness&More💙💙 Avatar
        LoveLifeHappiness&More💙💙

        My pleasure.

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  7. skimbradsteen Avatar
    skimbradsteen

    Beautiful poem!

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks so much!!

      Like

  8. Laurie Avatar
    Laurie

    Lovely.

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks Laurie!

      Like

  9. figsdlamini Avatar
    figsdlamini

    You write so beautifully, how I wish one day I could use such descriptive in my writing!

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks so much. I really appreciate it!

      Like

  10. Laura Avatar
    Laura

    Ooohh this is so enchanting and beautiful, and then building up to those falls at the end! I’m going hiking at the end of the month and hoping to catch some waterfalls! This has really got me in the mood now! Great shots always.

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks Laura! Have fun!

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  11. camilla wells paynter Avatar
    camilla wells paynter

    “The ravens dart above, in ones or twos, preferring a casual conversation about reason and magic, which are indistinguishable. For here is where skeptics and believers meet.”

    Fantastic!!

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks Camilla!

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  12. Marie-Gaye Barton Avatar
    Marie-Gaye Barton

    Beautiful but sad

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  13. NBevilaqua Avatar
    NBevilaqua

    Beautiful, especially (IMO) “The twist of one note, a change in the rhythm of their syncopation. They are full of distortion yet never abandon harmony.

    I don’t know if it’s intentional, but there are also a lot of great, subtle assonances. I’m big on assonances. 🙂

    (By the way, your new posts don’t seem to show up on my “Reader” thing here. Am I missing something? I’m still getting used to the “new” WordPress, which is quite different from the version I used to blog on about 20 years ago.)

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks! I’m not sure. I’ve had glitches before with my reader. You might unfollow and then follow me again. See if that works.

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      1. NBevilaqua Avatar
        NBevilaqua

        Okay–thanks! I’ll try that. I do get your comments–just not your posts.

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      2. Ahzio Avatar
        Ahzio

        Okay, you’re definitely in my feed.

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  14. nelangston Avatar
    nelangston

    Wow this is really beautiful. This, and your other love poem “Instanter” (sp?)

    Thank you for liking my poem by the way!

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks so much! I want to stay versatile, if I can. There’ll be more of these type of poems in the near future.

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    2. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio
      1. nelangston Avatar
        nelangston

        Thank you for this, I actually learned a new word lol

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      2. Ahzio Avatar
        Ahzio

        Sure. I wasn’t quite sure what you meant by sp. I chose the word on purpose. I realize it’s not one used frequently, so I totally understand. Take care!

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