The Mountain

It’s no wonder I long to get close to her 

To understand her vision 

To center myself as she is centered. 

She can appear clear, majestic 

Especially when the sun makes 

Its first appearance in early spring. 

At other times she hides behind a whirl  

Of gray, black, and haze… waiting. 

But I know she’s watching. 

I’ve travelled upon her paths 

From switchback to meadow 

From wilderness to timberline 

From gorge to plateau. 

In these places, she slows time down 

Where I carefully step upon boulders and rocks 

Slipping at times on a slope 

Steadying myself with my hand 

For balance 

Feeling her moist face, her coolness 

A roughness and yet a smooth calm. 

I can tell you her rivers are her voice. 

They have lulled me into thought 

And her streams are part blood, part tears 

Joy and pain, yin and yang, like mine 

For like her, I will not last forever. 

We are built of gravity and sun. 

She can scold with wind and howls 

And snow that piles upon her forest floors  

Into layers like thick frosting, dimming all senses. 

Even creeks and the moving stars vanish. 

I can lose myself within that space 

Attempting to ease my own fierceness 

For there is a respect that must be earned 

And I’m still learning 

With cautious, careful awareness of  

My own fragile, sensitive soul 

To reach a place upon her shoulders 

Where she plays with mist 

As if she is unwilling to tell secrets. 

But I know it is only the rain and clouds 

That seek her embrace, and once gone 

Her poetry is lucid and unambiguous. 

The eastern face of Mt.Hood on a warm October day. Not the side of Hood usually photographed. You can see the effects of climate change.
Starting my trek, up I go into the mist.

57 responses to “The Mountain”

  1. Jane Pryce Avatar
    Jane Pryce

    A lovely serenade to nature

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks Jane!

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  2. camilla wells paynter Avatar
    camilla wells paynter

    I love this! “In these places, she slows time down.” So true! So much in here that I resonate with! Beautiful poem!

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      You are a good reader Camilla. No wonder your writing is spectacular as well. Thanks.

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      1. camilla wells paynter Avatar
        camilla wells paynter

        Thank you, Ahzio. I was a solo backpacker for years. I really resonated with this one. You describe those moments of deep communion and imply the inevitable coming face to face with your own limitations inherent in this type of experience with nature. Really appreciate this!

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  3. J Walters Avatar
    J Walters

    I love the images this beautiful poem evokes – a mountain watching, waiting, speaking, playing, embracing, aging and more. Superb.

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks so much! You’re spot on with the themes and more. Take care!

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  4. Marie-Gaye Barton Avatar
    Marie-Gaye Barton

    Oh those spectacular mountains! Reminds me of my trips to Western Canada. Beautifully written.

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Yes, I remember when you wrote about your trip there. Thanks my friend.

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      1. Marie-Gaye Barton Avatar
        Marie-Gaye Barton

        Thank you. Keep creating these wonderful masterpieces.

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  5. loujen haxm'Yor Avatar
    loujen haxm’Yor

    Wonderful verse, Ahzio!

      Art

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks. I do appreciate it.

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  6. PrEdIcTaBlY UNpreDicTaBLe Avatar
    PrEdIcTaBlY UNpreDicTaBLe

    Wow!

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thank you so much!

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  7. PrEdIcTaBlY UNpreDicTaBLe Avatar
    PrEdIcTaBlY UNpreDicTaBLe

    Really resonated with this…. thank you

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Sure, I understand, for it is about “resonating”. From reading some of your posts, I encourage you to find a way to connect and don’t be afraid to be vulnerable. Just my 2 cent advice. Take care!

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  8. PrEdIcTaBlY UNpreDicTaBLe Avatar
    PrEdIcTaBlY UNpreDicTaBLe

    Thank you for reading… and I’m not a writer like you but I am on a difficult journey. Have you been on a similar journey?

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Yes and no. My parents weren’t religious.

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  9. PrEdIcTaBlY UNpreDicTaBLe Avatar
    PrEdIcTaBlY UNpreDicTaBLe

    Oh OK… Well I am really trying to connect, with myself… it is not easy as most of my life I’ve ignored and pretend like I don’t exist…
    I have to learn to trust myself, in trying to be consistent as much as I can… all very difficult for me. And actually seeing this process as important and worthy of my time. Thank you for taking an interest.

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  10. Wren Avatar
    Wren

    The imagery your words evoke is stunning. Wonderful poem. 🍀

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      There’s a magic out there. And if we listen, we can hear. Thank you “Wren”.

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      1. Wren Avatar
        Wren

        I grew up deep in the Ozark Mountains, so I’m well acquainted with nature’s magic and her voice. She still calls to me.

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  11. Janice Reid Avatar
    Janice Reid

    Simply beautiful!

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks so much Janice.

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  12. Karima Hoisan Avatar
    Karima Hoisan

    Such beautiful description of her majesty!!

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thank you Karima. I hope you saw some cool birds during your break!

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  13. Karima Hoisan Avatar
    Karima Hoisan

    Thank you and oh yes I did!! I live in Costa Rica…we have an amazing variety of birds here:)

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  14. Roksana Amelia Avatar
    Roksana Amelia

    A lovely free flowing verses like a river from mountain …..
    Beautifully crafted ♥️

    Love this
    ‘Joy and pain, yin and yang, like mine’ …..

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks Roksana!

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      1. Roksana Amelia Avatar
        Roksana Amelia

        My pleasure

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  15. backtojesus.wordpress.com Avatar
    backtojesus.wordpress.com

    This is the first poem of yours that I read. I enjoyed it immensely.

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks! I’m happy you liked it.

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  16. Lavada Dee Avatar
    Lavada Dee

    Love the picture. And a great way to start the day.

    Lavada Dee

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks. Yes, there’s two different kind of images of a mountain. One is through an old forest fire and the other is looking up through the mist.

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  17. Yogini Avatar
    Yogini

    Love this poem! Mountains mean a lot to me. This is one gorgeous mountain, great shots too.

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks. There are a few that are relatively close to me.

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  18. Carol Brennan King Avatar
    Carol Brennan King

    We are kindred spirits. I love the mountains and have often thrown a lunch, a jacket and writing materials and escaped to mountains once busy with settlers, miners, explorers, now bearing witness to those people through shells of farm houses, cemeteries, and train tracks that go no where.

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks Carol. I was deep inside a ravine just the other day, where the waterfalls sounded like thunder from the spring melt

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  19. Paula O'Cull Avatar
    Paula O’Cull

    Beautiful. I share your love for the mountains.

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  20. Danel Avatar
    Danel

    Like being wrapped up in true beauty. So perceptive of nature. It raises my own spirits. Thank you for posting. I love mountains.

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      I’m happy to find many kindred spirits.

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  21. Douglas Lloyd Peck praisebells@yahoo.com Avatar
    Douglas Lloyd Peck praisebells@yahoo.com

    (Hi Ahzio, I would like to include “The Mountain” also on my site.) Doug Peck praisebells@yahoo.com https://crownvalleyquarterly.wordpress.com

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks so much Douglas. But I must decline your offer as some of my posts are published elsewhere. You can, as others have done, create your own post, without my content included, and embed a link to my site. I am so grateful for your interest. Take care!

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  22. Robert Walton Avatar
    Robert Walton

    I especially like “We are built of gravity and sun.”

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks so much Robert!

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  23. Marie-Gaye Barton Avatar
    Marie-Gaye Barton

    Quite an adventure

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks Marie-Gaye!

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  24. camilla wells paynter Avatar
    camilla wells paynter

    Gorgeous, Ahzio! “I can tell you her rivers are her voice”! This whole poem is spectacular!

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks so much Camilla!

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  25. Kerri Elizabeth Avatar
    Kerri Elizabeth

    Absolutely beautiful!!!

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks so much Kerri!

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  26. Carolyn Nones Vazquez Avatar
    Carolyn Nones Vazquez

    Beautiful, in touch with the beauty of the place. She speaks to you.

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks Carolyn!

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  27. Sewa Avatar
    Sewa

    This is beautiful!

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thank you Sewa!

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  28. Ali Grimshaw Avatar
    Ali Grimshaw

    You have honored her well in words and image. What a beautiful mountain she is.

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks so much. I was so close on that day, I could see the texture of the glaciers.

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