Their Orange Suits

Here’s a poem of mine published by Spillwords. To be honest, I’m not that impressed with their use of AI art. It changed the meaning of the poem. That’s how strong images play into words. I appreciate your support! T. Ahzio

Their Orange Suits

12 responses to “Their Orange Suits”

  1. thesavvyspiritual Avatar
    thesavvyspiritual

    That’s a beautiful poem 💛

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks. I usually don’t post links. I’m not a great fan of them. But it’s appreciated. Take care!

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  2. jsimpsonpoet Avatar
    jsimpsonpoet

    Great poem. I agree with you about the art. You should be able to choose your own art.

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks. I did submit an image. They placed it next to my bio below the poem. Obviously they’re enamored with the new AI stuff. Just a few keywords, that’s all you need. To me, their image looks like something from a Saturday morning kids cartoon.

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  3. Ernie 'Dawg' Avatar
    Ernie ‘Dawg’

    Very nice.

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks Ernie!

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  4. Mare Martell Avatar
    Mare Martell

    The urgency that isn’t because no matter the outcome of the search, time is immemorial. Taking and giving with each tide reminding the breath holders the search continues

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Beautiful reading Mare. Thanks so much!

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  5. Nicci Attfield Avatar
    Nicci Attfield

    It’s a beautiful poem, and yes the art does change the message, but the poem speaks for itself. Beautiful.

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks Nicci! Take care!

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  6. loujen haxm'Yor Avatar
    loujen haxm’Yor

    Awesome verse, Ahzio!

    Art

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks Loujen!

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