Infinite String of Finites

The rain became a light drizzle. 

“Another story just started. You must think I’m weird.” 

“Sure, I like it.” 

“I’m weirder than that. I don’t feel anything, just everything. Or I don’t feel everything, just anything. Does that make sense?” 

“Yes, kind of. I understand what you mean.” 

The rain stopped. Only drips were heard, falling off gutters and tree limbs. 

“It’s so humid. That’s not normal for around here. And it’s changing. It seems there’s nothing we can do about it—it’s like those stories. I can’t find an end to them. I want them to end, but I don’t.” 

“You can try. That’s what you’ve always done. Don’t worry, it’ll work out.” 

“They keep my interest, but somehow, they’re waiting for something. Or is it me that’s waiting? Look how fast the steam is rising from the streets. You know, I think we’re like steam. First, we hit the streets hard like rain, then we move on, lighter.” 

The sun poked out from behind a cloud. 

“Sometimes I want to touch you, like no one has ever touched you before, but I only have these hands and they’re like everyone else’s.” 

“I like the way you touch me.” 

“Are my hands warm? I know I can be cold sometimes. There are different ways to touch.” 

A couple of heavy raindrops fell unevenly from the sky. As if another downpour was about to start. 

“Is all rain alike? I swear each raindrop touches the ground differently. I notice stuff like that. It’s soothing to me to listen to each storm, how different they are from one another. Do you think it’s true, that each raindrop creates a new life?” 

“I don’t know. I guess it could be like that.” 

The clouds began to move further apart from one another, and spots of blue sky appeared. 

“There’s a sound to the dry days. It’s like voices rubbing against one another. I can make one or two of them out, for a while. I write those ones down. Then, I come back to read them. It’s gibberish, all just a bunch of gibberish. I’m scared the rain will stop forever.” 

A pause, slightly comfortable, slightly uncomfortable. 

“Can I touch you now? I need to know.” 

“Will it help?” 

Underneath a “raining” fresh water spring.

17 responses to “Infinite String of Finites”

  1. Aelita Avatar
    Aelita

    i love it! 🤗💖

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks Aelita!

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  2. Fr. John Avatar
    Fr. John

    I like it all, but this is a beautiful line… “You know, I think we’re like steam. First, we hit the streets hard like rain, then we move on, lighter.”

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks so much. I left a message for you on one of your posts. Take care!

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  3. Margo Margan Avatar
    Margo Margan

    Nice short story. I really liked it. It’s an engaging style to write this scene with only dialogue and a few key descriptions.

    I just want to say, I think it’s cool how your blog shares such a variety of creative mediums.

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks so much Margo. I used to separate all my mediums on individual sites, but have recently been combing them all here. There are different ways to write. This short snapshot was influenced by Plato. Take care!

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  4. Mia Lofton Avatar
    Mia Lofton

    What a beautiful post. It felt as though I was there with them. And I really felt that paragraph that talked about rain and storms sounding different.

    Beautiful!

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks Mia!

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  5. isabellawolgoth Avatar
    isabellawolgoth

    A very good piece. I could feel the tone of the world just by the dialogue as is. I like all of the dialogue, but this bit really stood out to me: “There’s a sound to the dry days. It’s like voices rubbing against one another. 

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      I like that you mentioned “tone” Thanks so much!

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  6. camilla wells paynter Avatar
    camilla wells paynter

    I love the impressionism of this piece, and this is just lovely: “heavy raindrops fell unevenly from the sky.” To think of raindrops falling “unevenly” — it’s such a novel use of language. I just read Jane Hirshfield’s “Wetness: An Assay,” and the synchronicity of finding your piece right afterward is wonderful! She has this great line that your uneven raindrops for some reason (a similar impression?) called to mind: “A person, tilted a single degree,/knows their life altered.”

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks Camilla. I went and read Jane’s poem. Love it.

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      1. camilla wells paynter Avatar
        camilla wells paynter

        There seemed to be an overlap, a synergy of sorts with her poem and yours. I love when that happens!

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  7. Penbryarc Avatar
    Penbryarc

    This reminded me of a story I wrote that I haven’t put up yet. Check back in sometime. It will be called “She Dances On Clouds”.

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Okay. Let me know.

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  8. Jim Avatar
    Jim

    Lovely piece of writing. I enjoyed it!

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  9. isabellawolgoth Avatar
    isabellawolgoth

    A wonderful run: “There’s a sound to the dry days. It’s like voices rubbing against one another. I can make one or two of them out, for a while. I write those ones down.

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