Simply Heat

Such were our soft hands. 

We thought we spoke a new language 

Of skin – untarnished, a sweet sweat 

When our tongues touched 

And our fingers found their old purpose  

Sprawling out a blanket upon the beach 

Where the sun (or was it the sand?) 

Burned the soles of feet. Our love’s 

Stern arm, heavy as tenderness. —— 

There were specks, sand on our lips 

Licking fresh words or wounds 

None knew the difference, but they slipped, 

Travelled unscathed. 

The embrace welcomed, encouraged 

As if we were simply heat. 


Such are our hardened hands. 

Unable to speak the old language. 

Remnants written on paper, a poor papyrus of 

Conjugated verbs, glittering adjectives 

Slippery nouns, tucked between brittle envelopes  

Placed underneath threads and sewing needles 

Inside Mason Jars and old tobacco tins 

On basement shelves, a form of containment 

Where the stairway creaks, the furnace flickers. —— 

So much fire, two feet, just a walk 

To the vague haze of old words or wounds 

None know the difference, but they slip,  

Travel unscathed. 

The embrace welcomed, unwelcomed 

As if we were… simply heat. 

Deconstruction. An abstract image I made from water, rain, and clouds.

13 responses to “Simply Heat”

  1. JoJo Avatar
    JoJo

    Beautiful words , beautiful image 💖

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks so much JoJo!

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  2. Haniella's Eats Avatar
    Haniella’s Eats

    you use your words perfectly and the pictures that go alongside always matches the feelings you evoke. Well-done Mooncat🫶

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks Haniella. That’s great to hear. I had a choice between three different images.

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      1. Haniella's Eats Avatar
        Haniella’s Eats

        would I be selfish if I say I would still want to see the other 2 🫶🫶

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      2. Ahzio Avatar
        Ahzio

        No, not at all, but I don’t have a way to accomplish that at this point and time. WP message system doesn’t accommodate images.

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  3. Dojrzewalnia Myśli Avatar
    Dojrzewalnia Myśli

    Mesmerizing image.

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks! I thought so too.

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  4. LennaBoat Avatar
    LennaBoat

    Powerful writing, I like it.

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks so much!!

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      1. LennaBoat Avatar
        LennaBoat

        You’re welcome.

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  5. camilla wells paynter Avatar
    camilla wells paynter

    Profound. Simply excellent. I particularly liked this: “Our love’s

    Stern arm, heavy as tenderness.” Sums up the complexity of the emotions you’re conveying. Yeesh!

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks so much Camilla and also thanks for the feature!

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