Debris

She walks along the old road, its surface broken, cracked, revealing the dirt underneath. 

There are soft spots in the pavement scarred with plants, an occasional sapling, alive or dead. 

Not an easy road to walk. She’s careful. Always. 

Her eyes move along its lines, reading its rough syntax, wet on the edges, a dark, moist shadow frame. 

She places her hands flat upon a remaining level surface. 

Debris, pebbles, and a scree of thoughts stick to her. 

She raises up her hands like opening a book. 

How odd they look, their silhouette, alien. 

She knows where the road goes, down to the lighthouse, where the coast trail flirts with beaches, towns, and a highway, winding in and out of a forest that meets the ocean. 

She yells, for no particular reason, but for all the reasons in the world. 

She turns her head and looks back. 

She won’t walk forever. 

Old Cape Meares Loop. My image

13 responses to “Debris”

  1. Marie-Gaye Barton Avatar
    Marie-Gaye Barton

    So many parallels here. Can relate. I feel a poem of my own might come on sometime….

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Surely!

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  2. sfbulldogh Avatar
    sfbulldogh

    You be rockin’, Mooncat. Thanks for being on earth. h.

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks H.

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  3. Mohansingh Shekhawat Avatar
    Mohansingh Shekhawat

    Nice work

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks so much!

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  4. dandanyokunaru Avatar
    dandanyokunaru

    I like the photo.

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Yes, thanks. I’ve other photos of that road. I thought it fit the poem.

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  5. Walkingdownvimy Avatar
    Walkingdownvimy

    Love this:

    She knows where the road goes, down to the lighthouse, where the coast trail flirts with beaches, towns, and a highway, winding in and out of a forest that meets the ocean.

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks.

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  6. Satyriasis.Gray Avatar
    Satyriasis.Gray

    Honestly, this immediately made me think of the paths that I walked in my years of active addiction. It was weird. I could see the damages that I was causing, not only to myself but to others – close or far, but it did not matter in those moments. In those moments, all I held on to is that this is what I had to do for now – but I knew that those behaviors and paths were very finite and would come to an end… I just always assumed that end would be death, rather than personal choice.

    This made me think, and it also put me in a place that I don’t think about much any more and I am thankful for that. It is always good to revisit old mindsets, because it always gives me a better understanding of my current mindset and why it is important for me to always allow it to evolve and change.

    Thanks for sharing!
    (P.S. Reposting this because I am ignorant of this new type of WordPress, and I am not seeing my reply posted. If it ends up requiring approval before posting, please delete this one lol)

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Yes, responses, if set that way by the blog owner, have to approved before they appear. Sometimes there are trolls and scammers. But, you have really hit upon a theme of this piece few, if any, have understood. I am honored by your reply.

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  7. Satyriasis.Gray Avatar
    Satyriasis.Gray

    The honour is all mine. I always am thrilled to share bits of myself when I encounter a genuine sharing of others, no matter how obscure or personal the exchange may be. A gift always deserves a gift, and sharing our selves in the most raw state is the greatest gift there is.

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