Light Trap

His house is sunshine, a bright glow. The wind can only brush against the windows, slip away into daylight. He warms his hands against its walls and that heat keeps his palms soft. He touches you and you feel it beneath your skin.  

Beside his house, there’s a street. Each day cars flood its lanes. Their sound seeps in through cracks and it dims the house slightly. So, he becomes a moon, but doesn’t know the reason he illuminates. He orbits from room to room. 

Caused by his gravitational pull, the cars become muffled, a soft gauze of sound, buried, burnt, an unconscious melody of hidden explosions and the rubbing pulse of dark rubber upon packed oil glaze. There’s the slight hum of electric vehicles which strangely is a pedal point. Drone of the world. 

Little creatures smile at him, purr if they can. He pets them with hot fingers. But they think he is threadlike, a filament, a passage of current. Slowly, he becomes afraid of moths. 

He appears in any room, even rooms the moths never see. They are frantic, as frightened as he. He applies duct tape around the frames of the window screens. They eventually find their way in, erratic, asking questions with a frenzied calmness, is such a thing exists. 

When they die, they become powdered dust with wings covered in scales which diffract light. Still, they want lucid explanations about luminosity. His hands clasp, fingers interlace, leaving only the chaos of silence. 

Now, the cars can’t be heard, and they attempt to parallel park in awkward positions, their horns mute but they have sign language that comes in the form of lights, voices of the night. The moths are confused, flutter about, discharging dust, as they bump into what they think is an explanation. 

Light Trap, an abstraction. Image taken inside a nearly 100 year old 5 storied parking lot. (click on image to enlarge)

18 responses to “Light Trap”

  1. cazzycoop Avatar
    cazzycoop

    Wow this is absolutely amazing it took me to places I didn’t know I wanted to go. So many emotions in one piece. What a whirlwind I loved it . Thank you so much for writing this. Best thing I have read in a long time.

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks Coop! It’s a bit abstract. That’s the way I wanted it to be.

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      1. cazzycoop Avatar
        cazzycoop

        I love abstract it matches my mind

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      2. Ahzio Avatar
        Ahzio

        Lol! That’s great.

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      3. cazzycoop Avatar
        cazzycoop

        Sight is a wheelbarrow filled with sand
        Hearing is a hexagon
        Touch is a sky full of stars

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  2. Anonymous Me Avatar
    Anonymous Me

    Wow, wonderful writing 👏👏

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  3. AdelEsmaeilpour Avatar
    AdelEsmaeilpour

    well done, I enjoyed of reading this writing.

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks!

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  4. Marie-Gaye Barton Avatar
    Marie-Gaye Barton

    I’ve been considering this amazing post for some hours….a lot to see, feel and imagine. Will continue reading and rereading.

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  5. Dame Avatar
    Dame

    Imagery beautifully delivered!

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  6. d700fx Avatar
    d700fx

    A very good picture-composition …

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  7. Pen o’ the Woods Avatar
    Pen o’ the Woods

    You seem like a kindred spirit. Love this piece. As well as the piano compositions and the photos. Really lovely work.🙏🏼

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks so much! Yes, I grew up in the woods, with wild creeks and snowy mountains. It had its advantages and disadvantages. No room service and it got pretty darn cold. I prefer wicking socks to smartwool. Lol. So, cheers to a kindred socksperson.

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      1. Pen o’ the Woods Avatar
        Pen o’ the Woods

        Cheers! I do love a good pair of socks. I just found out that there are socks made from alpaca fur, which feels like cashmere. Looking forward to getting a pair of those. It’s a really really great company too so no worries there. And I was also lucky enough to find a turtle fur hat. And that doesn’t even exist, so I’m pretty sure we’re safe there as well.😊

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      2. Ahzio Avatar
        Ahzio

        Nice! Lol.

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  8. Author and Reviewer Charles S. Weinblatt Avatar
    Author and Reviewer Charles S. Weinblatt

    Excellent work. Expressive and concise. Well done. Looking forward to more.

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  9. mwcreations2024 Avatar
    mwcreations2024

    Absolutely love your style.. and your way of meshing words together… created a very real visual experience. Had to read it twice to catch the nuances. Thank you for sharing.

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks!

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