Mimesis

The high lakes are frozen clear, distorting the reflection of the mountain. 

Old men with trekking poles stab at hiking trails. All with Homeric hunger pangs, having lost their way back to Paris. 

They’re drawn to recite soliloquies to the unmoving cold, to agitated towhees, and dark-eyed juncos. 

Each, a glossy eyed Dionysus, drunk on the stinging scent of pine, instilled with a longing to name the mountain Helen. 

The mountain? She’s only shy in the rain. They immortalize her with iPhones, wearing a winter skirt. It’s a false offering, but the only real flower in the December forest is an occasional thistle.  

Once back upon studded tires and snow chains, their grey hair halos sit like laurel crowns. They profess Socratic love for Helen. But the mountain holds no dialogue, only a mimetic whisper to adorn their computer screens. 

This is an image of Mt. Adams I captured in 2020. Click on it to enlarge.

6 responses to “Mimesis”

  1. klekie Avatar
    klekie

    Wonderfully descriptive writing. You painted pictures with your words.

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  2. loujen haxm'Yor Avatar
    loujen haxm’Yor

    Awesome verse, MoonCat.
    Art

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Much appreciated!!

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  3. howtoseizethelife Avatar
    howtoseizethelife

    Amazing!

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    1. Ahzio Avatar
      Ahzio

      Thanks so much!

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  4. Marie-Gaye Barton Avatar
    Marie-Gaye Barton

    This is beautiful. Love the layout of your blog.

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